short story "Lost in the Seven Worlds" is currently being prepared for publication with Crushing Hearts and Black Butterfly Publishing, and I am beating my brains out about finding the perfect tagline for the Ebook. The tagline is a short sentence that should sum up the main idea of the book and I have turned upside down all the possible word associations that might stir some emotion in the alleged reader. After a sleepless night I have come up with three such examples and I am very undecided about which could be the right one. The perfect tagline should grab the reader by the...coat and convince him to buy the book. I should count on you, my dearest friends, to point me to the right direction (if there is such one) and indicate which of the three taglines might seem more...inviting.
The first one is "Memoirs of an unearthly love-affair" - it's short and concise but I am afraid the reader would say.."Give me a break with your freaking memoirs"
Earth and he was an immortal in his forth life". And the third one is: "Love me to death and then raise me again". I know they don't really make sense, if you don't know much about the story, but I wish to have an idea about their impact, if any :). Thank you and kisses.